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[DEMO] Stand By Me

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[DEMO] Stand By Me

By tacticalbread on Feb 4, 2010 12:31 pm

A cover of Ben E. King's 'Stand by Me.' LSDJ and Vox + Compression and slight Chorus.

This submission is licensed by author under CC Attribution Noncommercial Share Alike (BY-NC-SA)

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and if any of you guys are interested, I've uploaded a new demo of the song. tongue http://bit.ly/clfJok

thanks a lot guys. smile

and sorry for it being out of time, my rhythm is complete shit, and it doesn't help that my LSDJ goes off tempo a lot, lol.

and Nestrogen, I'll definitely take into account what you've said. smile

so far, I've added a sine wave 'kick' at 55Hz to cover the low lows, as there was nothing there before.

And I took out the chorus completely, but I'll add it in some spots. And before I was playing around with doubling the vox, and I kinda liked the effect, so I may do that as well.

Yes ! Bravo, I like it ! Good project but not finished ! Need more work ! Good luck ! wink

As said before, the chorus on the vox is a bit much. But.. I enjoy chorus on vox in VERY small amounts... ie; the CHORUS is an opportune time to add said effect... tastefully. And maybe you could add a second track of "backing vox" at key phrases in the tune. Other than that... it's pretty cool... minus being a little laggy. But, I looked past that. Please, redo it... and repost it. I'll check it out.

Out of time at points, seem to have a good voice though. Would say no to chorus on a track so minimal.

Why didn't I think of that? -_-

Thanks, lol. I'll definitely do a nice WAV bass.

As for the Chorus on the vox, I thought it made them sound a little fuller.

the corus on the vox sounds a bit odd to me, but i'm glad you havent drenched this in reverb.

Also considering this is a very minimal track, did you think about the bass line on the wav channel? you could get a far sexier bass sound with that.

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